Author: nbclarinet
Date: 2014-07-27 05:16
I think you're off to a very good start. I agree with the above poster that you had some nice voice leading. Based off of the composition majors at my school, I don't think its too far from the mark. My critiques would be to take a look at some of the runs in the clarinet part. Some of them felt like they were just outlining the chords rather than really saying something musically. I also think you should expand upon what you already have. Add more of a contrasting section, a tempo change, a new theme, something that makes the piece go somewhere (and then maybe return at the end?). Keep going with this!
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