Klarinet Archive - Posting 000157.txt from 2004/05

From: "Patricia A. Smith" <arlyss1@-----.net>
Subj: Re: [kl] OT: BAD sound AND writing contest for clarinettists; was,
Date: Sat, 8 May 2004 02:29:21 -0400

Ormondtoby Montoya wrote:

>Heh! You ave a winner there, Patricia. :-)
>
>Perhaps an adjective between "Leeson's" and "study"? ...and perhaps
>for the sake of alliteration, a "muddy" in front of "murky"?
>
>

Hmm, it could use some work, I do believe. How is this - the more
adjectives, the better...er, I mean worse:

"It was a dark and stormy night...and the muddy, murky, dark sounds of a
rehearsing bassett horn trio wended its way through the cavernous
passages that snaked beneath Dan Leeson's dimly lit, oak paneled study."

(I guess I'll have to leave the modifying phrase 'out of tune' for the
second sentence, eh?)

Patricia Smith
(unbelievable how many times I had to type my last name before I got
that right!)

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